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The Story Circle: A Line Runs Round The World, Part Three

Cameron D. GarriepyAaaaand we’re back on track!

Two weeks ago, I introduced you to Michael Carnell. Michael tagged Kate Shrewsday, who has passed the pen to Idiosyncractic Eye, a writer whose tales I’m familiar with from her days linking up with Write on Edge. Please welcome this “not-so-very-tall person in DMs and a Western hat” to the Story Circle!

A Line Runs Round the World, Part Three:

(Parts One and Two.)

Mio.

That was his name.

A face, a being that belonged in her past.

So what was he doing here in her present?

Their eyes met for the most fleeting of seconds, that was all, and he kept walking. He didn’t acknowledge her; he had no words to say to her, not even recognition flashed in those dark, haunted eyes. His eyes seemed not to see the physical world around them but were lost to some deeper, distant world.

She shuddered.

She held her eyes to where his had been for a long time.

He became a distant figure on the shore before she finally blinked.

It was now her eyes that had taken on a distant, haunted look. She knew now why people were so suspicious, so afraid of these walkers, they held a power, a threat that most people just didn’t even want to acknowledge: it could be them.
There wasn’t much difference between them both. She knew that. They were both human after all. They had both grown up in the same village, gone to the same schools but then everything changed. She shivered, an internal cold seem to creep across her skin and she found her eyes drawn to the distant figure, dark, slumped, hollow, getting ever further and ever smaller on the far horizon.

She mentally shook herself and told herself not to think of it, not to look upon the wreck that she could too have become, not to remember that night and all the days that followed it.

But just the briefest sighting of him, Mio, had undone all her years of careful work, her careful, measured training that kept her secure in the present and far away from the memories that she did all she could to suppress.

She could remember.

Vividly.

It was as clear as the sand and sea before her.

And that wasn’t even the most frightening part of it.

No, she knew now how easily that wraith could have been her.

And the guilt seeped slowly in.

And the fear.

The fear.

A fear so deep that it hurt.

A fear that she hadn’t even let herself whisper in the intervening years.

It could have been her.

It should have been her.

The face that she had tried so hard to hide from herself flashed up before her eyes.

A sweet, young face with tousled hair, braces and laughter, sixteen years old with all the promise of a future.

The one who lost and was lost.

She wept.

She remembered her parents organising their hasty removal to a new place when the gossip started going around, when the fingers started pointing. She remembered hearing how badly affected Mio had been, young and vulnerable, sensitive and caring, and how he had withdrawn within himself immediately. His family made excuses but then the fear set in, there were whispers and people kept their distance.

This was what had happened.

She had never known.

Never thought of him again.

She’d been able to forge a new life, a new identity almost.

The guilt weighed heavily on her.

They had all been responsible, not just him.

But, cowardly, they had left the blame and the responsibility to him and Mio had seemed willing to accept it. He dealt with the consequences; he spoke with parents and authorities; he faced the ceaseless questioning; he became the scapegoat.

And scapegoats never fared well.

This was what had happened.

It could have been her.

It should have been her.

The Story Circle, June 2013: A Line Runs Round the World

Cameron D. GarriepyI am a sporadic hostess at best. I know.

This month, I’m excited to introduce you to Michael Carnell. I met Michael through Andra Watkins, whose blog is a nexus of wonderful people. He alternately taunts me mercilessly with delicious food photographs from his adventures in Charleston and reminds me not to lose heart when things are challenging. I am, oddly, grateful for both. He is a man of many talents and passions, and a clever, charming guy I’m delighted to call a friend…

…which makes it all the more fun to present to you: Continue reading

The Story Circle: The Forest King, Finale

Even the best-laid plans go pear-shaped sometimes.  Back in January, SAM from My Write Side started the first Story Circle of 2013. SAM chose Chelle of A Writer Is Born to pick up the threads of her story.

After a bit of an organizational hiatus, Shannon of thesqueakywheelblog is here to bring The Forest King to a close.

If you’re new to The Forest King, catch up on SAM’s beginning here.

The Forest King: Finale:

For a millisecond, Chival’s gnarled horn flashed with a brilliance of light and heat so intense it seemed that he could have set the sky itself on fire with a passing thought.

The future borne of the prophecy flashed across his inner vision –the great and evil cat, rolling shoulders stalking a land torn asunder, Chival at his side, his right hand. Eyes that had gleamed with strength and pride now scanned the horizon, flat and black. The revulsion that speared Chival to his core was deep enough to shake the dregs of the prophecy’s weight from his mind.

Muscles honed over a century bunched, the spark returned to his eyes, beaming lamps in the murk of his desolate forest. His neck elongated, he threw his head back, and opened his mouth. From a place that he hadn’t known existed came a roar the likes of which no creature had ever heard before. The insouciance of the enemy faltered, yellow flickering through the tree trunks halted.

“Come to me, coward!” Chival bellowed. “I am the only rightful king of this place! You will come forward, and you will pay the price of the interloper!”

Scarred and filthy paws the size of a warrior’s shield padded from the broken tree line of their own accord. The cat’s huge head shook back and forth with agitation, dried blood and twigs falling from his wild mane.

Charred grass crackled into ash under their feet with little pfft sounds as the two mightiest creatures in creation circled each other. The cat eyed Chival with a manic amber glint, and the unicorn blazed right back in shades not found anywhere else in nature. The shoots who had prematurely begun their quest for the sun rustled under hooves and paws, wakening to the quickening air around them.

It was allegory come to life, a showdown of good versus evil, of shadow against light. Chival knew in his heart that one would never eradicate the other, it was an impossibility. All he could do was fight to have the upper-hand. In that moment, he realized his enemy’s weakness. The cat did not have a purpose to fight for; he didn’t stand for anyone, even himself. He fought only for the descent of darkness, the amusement of destruction.

Chival stopped pacing and stood, head and shoulders above the cat, proud and calm. He leaned forward slowly, watched a lip curl over teeth as sharp as razor blades and long as a man’s forearm. “Charge me” he whispered, and danced backwards.

Two mammoth front legs came off the ground into a fighting stance and Sicara loosed a big cat’s feral snarl, pounced. A claw tore through pearlescent grey hide before a hoof collided with his jaw, snapping his head backwards. He growled, circled around low, and tried to come from the side to grab a leg and hobble his ancient enemy.

Chival laughed even as dull gold fluid oozed from his wound. Soot stirred into the air and into Sicara’s eyes as the unicorn dug in his hooves to spin around and face the cat again. “There is no victory here for you today, Sicara.”

The cat stopped his search for a weakness and snuffled out a laugh of his own. In a voice like a falling mountain of gravel he said, “I am not the one who bleeds, Chival.”

“I am the one who bleeds, you’re right. I bleed for my land.” So saying, Chival bent his back legs until he sat, looking both ridiculous and regal. A single drop of blood fell from his flank to the ground. A flash so bright it reversed black and white on the color spectrum destroyed their vision.

As it cleared, Sicara had done with talking and lunged forward. He went nowhere. Startled, he yanked his legs up and back as hard as he could and still went nowhere. Clarity returning, he blinked and tried to focus on his feet. Vines, roots and flowers wrapped his legs from toes to belly and held him immobile.

Chival stood, unfolding to his full height, and stepped closer until he could feel the cat’s breath huffing against his chest, fetid and heated. “My land can defend itself, you see. My responsibility this day is ensuring that this is something you can never forget.”

Death was not what Chival was dealing out. So hot that it slid in like it was melted wax, the horn cleanly took out the great cat’s left eye.

“You are now marked trespasser and the stink of your evil will never taint this land again.”

The Story Circle: The Candlestick Killer, Finale

Cameron D. GarriepyFebruary’s Story Circle was kicked off by the talented and lovely Eden Baylee! In addition to writing seriously gorgeous erotica, here Eden turns her pen to thrillers. She passed the story to author John Dolan, whose musings you can find on his blog, GalericulatePart three was left in the capable hands of author Billy Ray Chitwood.

Billy Ray handed the finale to Diane Strong. Diane is the author of Out and Back and the Running Suspense series, which begins with The Run. Diane is an athlete, a writer, a journalist, a homeschooler… you can learn more about her on her blog, Running Commentary.

If you missed the beginning, start with Part I, first. Susequent parts will link from there.

The Candlestick Killer, Finale:

Manfred Bauer leaned his tanned body back in the reclining chair with a sigh and pushed his manicured feet deep into the warm sand. It felt comforting. The sun sat just above the horizon casting an orange light over the vast beach and colorful bungalows. He breathed in the warm salty air, basking in the solitude. His thoughts drifted back to nine months ago, to memories he tried to keep out of his head but usually failed.

It had been so close.

Had he not changed his mind at the last minute and forced Joy to drive away from her apartment his pathetic but rhythmic life would have been doomed. The investigators would have captured him in her apartment, guilty. Evidence of his plans to kill her would have been obvious, had they reached him before the act which they most likely would have since he planned to have his way with her first…stretching out the night.

He would be on death row right now.

They wouldn’t have needed to drag a confession out of him, it would have spilled out. But then he wouldn’t have cared if they’d sentenced him to death. He had prepared for death anyway, and he certainly wouldn’t have made a difference if it come at the hands of the state or his own hands. He had wanted to die either way. He’d had no desire to remain in a world so appalled, so disgusted by him.

His gift hadn’t been enough. Sure he could influence the feelings of women, make them think they wanted him briefly, just long enough for him to have his way with them. But the manipulation always proved temporary and counterfeit. It had been like stretching a rubber band, you could pull it taut but as soon as you let go, it snapped back to its original shape, unchanged.

The sudden change of plans had saved him. There hadn’t been a chase, Joy’s back-up investigators weren’t close enough to understand what had happened until it was too late. He had ripped the wires from her body and tossed her cell phone into the back of a truck heading in the opposite direction. By the time the investigators realized they were following the wrong vehicle and got an APB out on the car, he had ditched it over an embankment.

Before making good his escape in his own car, Manfred had made a quick stop at his home which fortunately for him was not yet under surveillance.

As he scooped out the contents of his safe, he had recalled the phone call a year ago notifying him of his mother’s death. In spite the coldness between them his heart had sunk. His father’s death the year prior had hardly phased him, only creating a glimmer of sympathy toward his mother, now alone in his childhood home. His spirits had lifted, however, when in the same conversation he was informed that his mother, in good Catholic form, had left the entire estate to her one and only child, despite her never wanting him. Or perhaps because of it.

He wasn’t rich by American standards, but as he emptied the safe knew he could live quite comfortably in Mexico for the rest of his life. Moreover, he was struck by the realization that for the first time in his life, he actually wanted to live.

Manfred reached for his frosty pina colada and took a long pull from the large glass. He ran his tongue slowly over his upper lip collecting the salt from the exfoliated skin. His pale blue eyes stared into his drink, an unfamiliar image reflected back at him. The person staring back still felt so foreign with his clean shaven chin, plucked and trimmed eyebrows. Who could have known that a fresh hair style, a little dental work, daily hygiene and clean fashionable clothes could make a semi-handsome man out of him?

Of course, his new found love of running on the beach had helped tremendously. For the first time ever he had abdominal muscles and a tight ass that even he wanted to grab. The endurance he had acquired had worked for him two fold, he could run farther than most but even more importantly, he had become something of an athlete in the bedroom too.

This new life… how different it was from the one he had left behind. That creature he had been back in New York wouldn’t recognize the confident, loved man relaxing on this beach as the sun set across the ocean horizon. The Chinos, the Birkenstock’s and the soft organic cotton shirt draped over his muscular chest would all have been alien to him. Only maybe one thing would not…

“Joy, dear?” Manfred twisted his body and called out to the small bungalow behind him. A slender woman appeared carrying a tray of fresh fruit in her long tanned arms. A candle stick poked from the pocket of her long white cotton smock. Sleek, black tendrils of hair cascaded down her back, swaying as she walked carefully over the warm beach sand.

“Manfred, oh what an evening. It’s just to die for…”

“Yes, Joy. Pure Joy.”

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